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September 25, 2013
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Reader's P.O.V
I was crying and under a tree, another beating from bullies today... I wanted them DEAD! I wish they were dead so I could live in peace, but hat would be wrong of me to wish for... Right? I tried to get up on my feet but ended up falling down. I tried once more and BARELY able to stand, I limped home, covered in blood. No one bothered to help as they watched me limp away... I was sick of these people and this world. I want to die and stay in a world where there is no evil, pain, suffering, or bullying. I smiled to myself and entered my house, and was greeted by a worried dad. "what happened to you?!" I looked into my dad's eyes and smiled weakly, before collapsing on the floor... my world turning black.

"ugh" I woke up and another flashback happened... the pain, suffering and laughter.

"you have a hard life don't you?" I jumped out of my skin and nearly screamed but stopped myself. I looked over and saw a young man in blue sitting on my dresser, with black, though it looked like it wasn't there originally... His hand was black and had sharp nails, and half his face was black with a white eye... Who is this guy?! "what's your name?" he asked as he jumped off the dresser and headed over to me.

"_-_____" I whispered, my voice stammering a bit.

"____ eh?" he looked at me with those blue eyes and reached out with his hand, not the black one.

"call me Shadow Italy... Or just Feli for short" I burst into tears and he gave me a weird look, then with his hand he lifted up my chin, and looked into my (color) eye's. "sh sh sh, it's OK" he was so kind to me... Why?

"Why are you helping me?" I mumbled and he chuckled lightly to himself.

"I help people in pain and make it so they don't have to suffer anymore" he caressed my cheek and I blushed. "Meet me here at 7:00, I'll be here and we'll discuss what we can do about that one wish of yours" He backed up and vanished into the mirror. I smiled and went back to sleep, thinking of Feli, and how he could make my world better...

The next morning
I was sleeping peacefully until my alarm went off... "Top news stories today! 4 young men were found dead in a sewer last night, the cause of death is unknown but they appear to be covered in a black substance that can't be removed!" I jolted and stood by my alarm to listen in on some more. Did Feli do this?! "The black substance can't be removed by force, it's almost like they were born with it! and strange features are etched into there bodies, including a message, the details are coming up next!"

"..." I waited and I got dressed, brushed my teeth, hair, ate breakfast, packed my bag, and made my lunch before the news was back on. I ran upstairs and sat on my bed.

"The details include: A black arm, with claws,black patches on clothes AND skin, half of there faces are black with a white eye and sharp fangs in the black area of the mouth. along with a message,carved in there backs. 'one wish granted, one left. sincerely, Shadow Italy' this strange message makes no sense to us, but obviously someone out there knows what this message means"

 The news ended and I went to school, got picked on, learned, got slapped, learned, ate, then got beat up and walked home with a bloody bruised body. I laid down on the bed and burst into tears of pain... it hurt so much... I hadn't realized that Feli was on the dresser again. I only realized he was there until he set a hand down on my shoulder, I looked up with red puffy eyes to see Feli looking down at me with eyes full of sorrow and pity.

"looks like you got beat up again... here" He bent down and took my hand, and licked it. I winced and looked at my hand, licking the blood away. He then pulled me into a hug and I hugged back, crying into his shoulder. "sh sh sh, it's OK hunny" I cried and he sat down on the bed and held me tightly, not wanting to let go...

"Th-Thank you s-so much f-for killing them!" I cried and held on tighter to the man that comforted me, protected me, made me feel safe and sound... I looked into his eyes and he leaned closer to me, lips parted. My heart pounded as his lips pressed against mine. His skin was so soft.

"your welcome _____... Now are you ready for your second wish?" I looked into his eyes and had no clue what he was talking about!

"you had 2 wishes, 1 was for those assholes to be killed and two was to live in a peaceful world" I looked into his eyes and something clicked in my mind, now I remembered...

"W-Will you be there?" I questioned the italian country.

"Of course, I don't want anyone else to be in my world but you" I nodded and looked into his eyes. He kissed me again and I felt my mind slipping from this world.

I woke up in a field of flowers, under a tree, with Feli sitting beside me, sleeping. I looked at him and in his sleep reached over and grabbed me like a little boy reaching for his teddy bear. I squeaked in surprise but snuggled closer to the one I love>

"I love you Feli"

"I love you too, _____" He then fell asleep with me in his arms, I was surrounded by warmth and security, like A protective shadow blanket...
I DO NOT OWN DREAMTALIA!!! This my first reader X story, between YOU and shadow italy, enjoy
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FAuCHeReVE Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014

you realize he wouldn't call himself 'Shadow!Italy'

because he's not aware of his shadows-}}
lostsoullover Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh mai gawd  the best story I have read so far
babymama90 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
If only that really happened to me! *Sigh.*
HetaOniLover16 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
X'D same!
japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So, could someone please explain to me what is dreamtalia and what is shadow italy exactly? I mean I've seen pictures of shadow italy, but I'm still confused.... I liked the story though!
HetaOniLover16 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
DreamTalia is an RPG game about  a creature called a Fauchereve, which has the ability to make a paradise, but at the same time, if they dont wake up they end up dying, there minds disconnecting from the real world, the Feauchereve took over Italy and the countries try and save Italy before his mind disconnects from the world forever. And thanks so much x3
japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for the explanation! :iconletmehugyouplz: And you are very welcome! ^w^
HetaOniLover16 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
X3 Anytime
japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I also love your russia icon! >w< He's so cute!
(Russia's my second fave hetalia character)
HetaOniLover16 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
X3 I know right?? x3 I can send you the link to her da, she made others like this one, like england, 2p italy, and canada (who?)
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